【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' @/ q' [0 l8 ~% fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- X0 e- [5 ?/ d! k. CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% z) v$ P. I4 J5 S- U" qThe sky is happy down to its soul
& v) R: M1 h3 ~) o7 _. ~; ~1 ]With the moon kissing it every night
' e4 a. u) y: A6 N6 R) HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- [# j& c4 t3 Q2 u3 ?: HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. A: \3 J, F' d& `: m- ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( y, x+ o, c# ?% A4 E1 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 g2 p8 o- E, U1 E8 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 |6 \8 j/ i% T2 D. ~) d3 TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 k# d" @: `" f4 o6 g2 U- b' ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' E- g9 I- |8 z5 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* @1 S$ {8 x! b' Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 Q7 ~  W# }% m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ u3 i5 c7 ?5 g" y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 D- J, X. W2 y: x5 C! F; E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ J/ Z) G4 S$ c# f" ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 K  G4 n9 d; m: {, w" u; K% Q5 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 }  F5 G2 N3 M" |- Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! [# m1 I; ~, S# I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ T6 y4 ^. B6 Q) ~' ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( s: Q% f6 e( d8 P: @  v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ |  p/ J9 N$ r5 z3 h1 |1 z# z; r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ e0 k. V8 J& j/ T8 }! D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 {: j; u& g* j; M& R( F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 _* T: D* B1 x) ?# V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& O+ h  q) [5 }# F! ?' {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( r7 ]8 ~0 v/ b4 _/ G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. M  D' M  H( _' @$ h) n& Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 D- e8 |- P2 r; R. d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 Q; K% S8 ~+ ]  i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ N7 m+ V' e4 n+ \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 k+ ?& J3 F# e. M* q( G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 x0 D" T& Q! O4 s4 X$ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 ^2 q- ?$ o1 }: [6 i* S6 \3 ^0 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 T6 q! B% B) E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 s/ W: [# W) M* m8 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 A7 s& J. Z' a7 I( j1 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' q1 k' `( ?$ u/ w( m( a) w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" c9 F7 b. U* P. ~+ D/ n5 [6 Y' [: e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: p4 z7 x$ U; r- B& L9 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* w+ u( z" v* @% g/ M/ h' `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( [6 G- n+ i6 y5 z. M2 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 }# x: \5 V+ e6 d8 e0 o! V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>